Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Your Novel

Your Novel So Far

Dear Grade Fives!
   
       
Today, in your Blog response, I would like you to write a complete paragraph telling me what your novel is about so far.
Remember, I am expecting a well-crafted paragraph. To help ensure this, please use the checklist very carefully. It is intended to make it easier for you to complete a writing assignment successfully. Take advantage of it.
As usual, I look forward to reading your responses.
Love, Mrs. French

29 comments:

  1. I have read chapter 1, 2and3 in Hatchet. So far the pilot had a heart attack while he was driving the plane. Then Brian had to drive the plane all by himself. Then he runs out of fuel and he crashes on a lake. That’s what has happened so far in Hatchet.

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  2. I am reading The Gammage Cup. The first chapter is about the setting like how it is called Sipper On the Water or how it is surrounded by mountains. The second chapter is about this old treasure chest past down from Walter The Earl’s ancestors. They find an old sword, old suit, old mask. I wander what chapter three has in store for me.

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  3. Brian went on a plane to see his dad in Alaska.The pilot was flying the plane he had a heart attack.Brian knew he had to do something so he lifted the controls up and right before he hit the water.He flew up in to the sky and he was flying south but dident know where he was going.Than a bit after that the plane crashed he fell out of the plane and was left with cloth and a “Hatchet.Brian went on a plane to see his dad in Alaska.

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  4. So far hatchet is about a boy that is in a plane with out a pilot flying to his dads.
    The boys name is Brian and his dad lives in the Canadian oil fields but well Brian is in the plane the pilot has a hart attack. When the pilot has a hart attack Brian was alone in the sins he was the only passenger aboard. When the pilot had a hart attack he bum t the plane off cores witch means the plane will run out of gas before it gets to its target.thats what hatchet is about so far.

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  5. My Novel


    My novel is about a 14year old boy named Russell. My book is about a boy named Russell who wants to leave his village and find a song to learn about dogs and birds. Oogruk is helping Russell to find his song. Russell learns how to drive a dogsled and to use Oogruk dog’s. DogSong is about a boy named Russell.

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    My book is action packed and quite sad. My book always has something big going on. So either if the pilot has a heart attack or Brian is crashing the plane into the trees the story always has a big topic.The sad part of it is his perents are divorced,but if they were not devorced he would have crashed the plane in the first place.My book is lots of fun.

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  7. Dear Mrs. French

    Today I am going to tell you about my novel Dogsong so far. Dogsong is about a boy named Russel, a 14 year old Eskimo boy. Russel is unhappy about how is life is, he hates the smowmachines, he hates the house he lives he is unhappy that his people have abandoned the “old way”. The only person in Russel’s village that hasn’t abandoned the “old way” is Oogruk the old Eskimo who is the only person in the village who has a dogsled and team. Oogruk is teaching Russel how to survive on his own in the wild so he can go find the “old way” e.g. teaching him how to hunt with a bow and harpoon the way the old people did, teaching him to use the dogsled. One day when Russel was hunting for seals on the sea ice the ice broke away from the mainland and rotated around so when Russel went the way he thought was the way home it turned out it was the wrong way, after that he rode the dogsled until he saw the mainland and then he threw the dogs onto an ice chunk jumped on himself and broke the ice chunk away and rode it home. That is my novel so far.

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  8. My book is action packed and lots of drama and my character is a young boy
    named Brian. My story is about Brian going to visit his dad on a one passenger airplane.
    Then the airplane’s pilot has a heart attack so Brian has to fly the plane. Now Brian is
    Trying to fly the plane on to the edge of the lake. My book is action packed and lots of
    drama.

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  9. Dear Mrs. French
    My Novel
    Today in my blog response I will be talking about what’s going on in my novel “Dogsong” so far. In my story right now in the second chapter Russell was just with Oogruk eating deer eyeballs. But as Russell was talking to Oogruk they were actually singing a song. But before Russell left, his father told him that Oogruk was famous for his wise songs. That’s what is happening in my novel Dogsong.
    Love,??????????????????????????

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  10. In my novel Flying SoLo is about a girl and a boy. The girl in flying solo is named Rachel white, and the boy is named Bastian and Bastian has a dog named Barkley he's just a puppy! In the first chapter Tommy feathers dies before he dies Rachel is really rude to him he tries to give her pie and she says “I don’t like sweets”. In the book Bastian is moving to Hawaii but he can’t bring Barkley or Barkley has to be kept away from everybody incase he will make people sick or other animals. Rachel has a frozen voice because of Tommy’s death.

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  11. Hatchet

    My book Hatchet is about a boy named Brian who is in a plane with the pilot who is a 40 year old guy named, ummmm his name is uhhhhhh whats his face I don’t know his name, but niether does Brian, Brian doesn’t know his name because the engine is so loud that he didn’t hear him say his name. The plane Brian is in is very small. Gasp the pilot has a heart attack, his chest rips open and he’s hitting every seat behind him Brian tried to help but the pilot already seemed dead. All Brian could do is try and save himself, what else could he do. He tried using the radio he yelled out “SOMEBODY HELP ME” but it was no use nobody answered, he had to crash land somewhere, but where there were no clearings, so Brian figured he should land in a lake, Brian sees one it’s an L shaped lake he tried turning to land but he lost the lake, lucky for him he saw a pond behind him he crashed in it, after the plane crashed he tried getting free and swam to shore. And that is what I have read in Hatchet! :)

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  12. My novel is about kids that are in the same class. The first girl in the book is Jessica Cook .she lost her voice because somebody in her class died. The second person in my book is Bastian Farwell he is moving to Mexico. The last person I read about is Sean O day he lives in a mansion. My book is about kids that are in the same class lives.

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  13. My novel is so far about this kid on a plane and his name is Brian and he is on his way to his dads. The pilot starts to slam himself against his seat and also starts to rube his arm and then he has a heart attack. Then Brian starts to grab the radio and then he starts to say hello into the radio. Then Brian starts to think up a plan for when he lands his plan was when the plane ran out of gas he would land near a lake and he doesn’t see any lakes around. Brian is on his way to his dads for the weekend.

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  14. So far the book is about Walter the Earl and Gammage. He finds the ancient treasures. In the boxes were armor, swords, shields, trumpets, battle flags and scrolls. They also found magic cloaks with the treasure.
    Gammage is the one that brought the treasure to The Land Between the Mountains.

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  15. The book I am reading is called King of the Castle. This story is about a man that can’t read . but he wants to learn how. The book I am reading is called King of the Castle.

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  16. Why I like my book

    Why I like my book! I like my book because there’s a lot of adventure in it! There’s always something going on e.g. Walter the Earl and the others finding the treasure! I also like the poems in the middle of the chapter I don’t know what I like about them I guess I just like reading them! Those are the reasons I like my book, The Gammage cup! Thank you Mrs. French for reading this paragraph!

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  17. Brian is going on a airplane and the pilot is having a heart attack. Brian is on a airplane just going to see his dad there is only two people in the plane and that is Brian and the pilot. Just when their in the air for about twenty minutes the pilot was having aches and panes with a weird smell. The pilot was saying weird stuff, saying his heart was coming apart and Brian knew what was going o, the pilot was having a heart attack. The pilot is having a heart attack so the pilot is know use and the plane is driving all by its self. Brian is going on a airplane and the pilot is having a heart attack.

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  18. My novel

    Dear, Mrs. French

    The novel I’m reading is The Gammage Cup. It is about a lady named Muggles who lives in a village called Slipper - On – The – Water. It is also called Land between the Mountains. Walter the Earl found treasure and scrolls from the leader Gammage. That is what happened in the Gammage Cup so far.

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  19. I am reading flying Solo. Flying Solo is so far about a boy moving to Hawaii. In Chapter one a boy dies so a girl in his class will not speak. Chapter three is about a girl in the morning before school. I am reading Flying Solo.

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  20. My Novel

    The novel I am reading is the Gammage Cup. It’s about a woman named Muggles that lives in a small town that’s called Slipper- On-The-Water. Muggles, Curly Green and Walter the Earl find ancient treasures underneath Walter the Earl’s house. The three of them try to make sure no one finds it because they are afraid someone will try and steal it. That is what is happening in The Gammage Cup right now.

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  21. I do not ustrange. I read fantasy before but it made since. I hope I get hatchet because it seems expiry. Like all the hotter books. I do not understand my book.

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  22. My novel
    My novel flying solo is about a boy named Tommy Feathers. He has a crush on Rachel. Rachel does not like Tommy. She gets a phone call, it’s her best friend Missy she says that Tommy died in his sleep! That is why my novel flying solo is about a boy named Tommy Feathers

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  23. My novel is about a boy named Russel Susskit, he goes to Oogruk’s house to learn about the old way’s. Russel learns that everybody had there own song’s that they would dance to. He finds a cool bow and arrow that he thinks should be in a museum. Russel can only pull the arrow back about five inches. My novel is about a boy named Russel Susskit.

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  24. Dear Mrs. French
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    I’m reading a book about a boy named Russell Suskit. So far in the book he goes to Oogruk’s house and learns things the old fashion way. Later in the story he learns how to run the dogs and goes hunting and brings back hare and ptarmigan. Then in the next chapter he and Oogruk go with the dogs to hunt seal for his oil lamps and then Russell starts hearing voices and weird ones. I wonder what chapter five is about.

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  25. My book is action packed and lots of drama and my character is a young boy named Brian. My story is about Brian going to visit his dad on a one passenger airplane. Then the airplane’s pilot has a heart attack so Brian has to fly the plane Now Brian is Trying to fly the plane on to the edge of the lake. My book is action packed and lots of drama.

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  26. Hatchet

    My book is so far about Brian’s plane crashing. He was in the plane because he was going to his dads; he always visits him there when he is off school. Brain is haunted by the fact of his parents getting divorced. So Brain’s plane has crashed and he is in a lot of pain from the bugs biting him. My book so far is about Brian’s plane crashing!
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  27. So far Hatchet is about a boy that is in a plane with a pilot that has a heart attack. The boy’s name is Brian and his dad lives in the Canadian oil fields but well Brian is in the plane the pilot has a heart attack. When the pilot had a heart attack Brian was alone in the plane sins he was the only passenger aboard. When the pilot had a heart attack he bumped the plane off cores which means the plane will run out of gas before it gets to his dad’s. That’s how the pilot has a heart attack in Hatchet.

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  28. Dear Mrs. French

    I am going to tell you about the book I am reading called Hatchet. It is an awesome book! I am only on chapter three. I am only on chapter three because I was sick for a long time. In the first chapter it says that there is a boy named Brian. He is thirteen years old. He was flieng over the Canadian Wilderness in an airplane. In the next chapter it says that Brians mom broke up, but before they broke up Brians mom gave him a hatchet. In the end of the chapter the airplane pilots chest was hurting and it got worse and worse. The pilot had a heart atack!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  29. This is haw my book is going so far. My book is going good .I can’t believe haw my book is going. Brian crashes the pilot dies. This is haw my book is going so far.

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